Hi Harry I really like this presentation and how you wrote goals for each topic we have in Panmure Bridge School. I found it interesting how you thought you had to use ellipsis and commas more I think you use them just fine. One thing you could improve on is your background and make it a bit more creative
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Hi Harry I really like this presentation and how you wrote goals for each topic we have in Panmure Bridge School. I found it interesting how you thought you had to use ellipsis and commas more I think you use them just fine. One thing you could improve on is your background and make it a bit more creative
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